what do you think(this is hero from WAYANG WWORLD)

[silverpurple]

[Helm]

I think that even after fixing your img tags the picture doesn't show. Perhaps deviantart doesn't allow hotlinking?

[silverpurple]

because attach mode not show when i try to upload..

[9_6]

I think you should upload your pics to something like www.tinypic.com if you want to display them directly.

[silverpurple]

okay ill try

[9_6]

Alright, now I think you should stop using the jpg format and post a gif or png of the piece at its original size so it doesn't fill out my entire 1280x1024 screen.

[silverpurple]

haha sorry...and i already change..thanks anyway

[Jad]

It's'a pillowshaded!

Line art is nice, coloring is not. It's more or less just flood fill with some low-contrast nuances hugging the outlines - not pleasing.

I think that if you just made all the color spaces flat, completely without shading, your image would look much clearer, crisper and pleasing.

And then I think you should reshade it from there with more contrast. Try to shade with big color blocks with the same confidence that you draw solid shapes in your lineart - it's the same theory - you don't TINT the 'filling' of the lineart, you draw new clear shapes within it to show form.

Get it? I don't think I'm being clear

(also I really like this spriteycharacter, so don't feel hurt, I just want it to look even better <3 )

[silverpurple]

oh waw..thank's i guess i learn many about this pixel art..next time i will make something better than this..hehe

[Gil]

Is this a lineart by someone else? The shading on this piece, plus your avatar, plus the other threads you made make me doubt you actually did that lineart yourself. I'm sure you're not willingly withholding that information, so I'm asking. Who is the original author of the lineart?