AuthorTopic: A Bird, of Unparalleled Evocative Power (WIP)  (Read 6622 times)

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Re: A Bird, of Unparalleled Evocative Power (WIP)

Reply #10 on: December 29, 2009, 07:26:37 am
Hmm, maybe I'm missing something in the title, but what exactly is this character evoking?

Nothing, it's just sarcasm. The working-title was "A Bird (WIP)", which was pretty ... banal.

unparallelity, of course.
I think the tailfeathers might be more noticeable and in character with the aloof air this creature exhudes if they were pointing upwards and/or outwards rather than downwards.

Yeah, that would read a lot better too.