[WIP] Hero icon

[dalonedrow]

Hi all.  I am pixel art newbie working on a hero icon for a 2D RPG. 

And here he is again in cotton robe and leather armor


I'm looking for any C+C I can get on this piece and tips on pitfalls to avoid or areas newbies like me always seem to overlook.

Thanks!

[bengo]

I've made an edit for you my friend, I hope it can help you out, remember to treat things as shapes, especially this small and remember to know where your light source is.

[dalonedrow]

Thanks for checking it out bengoshia.  When you looked at the original, what stood out to you the most in need of correction?