Death Lord - PixelArt Scene

[venatorinc]

@Opacus:
I said the "I have over a year of experience" sentence because QuaziGNRLnose said "especially when it's one of your first pixels". Also, I thought 1 year of experience was good for this art, I kinda have like... 2-3 years of experience, still not 4 like u said. And I only focused on improving my art since a year, so I don't have as much experience as I first thought  You got me thinkin
Doesn't mean I'm givin up of course. I think I'm redoing the WHOLE piece, I actually thought a corpse would look cool, but seeing ur Evil Lord (first pic) makes me think different I'm gonna redesign the whole thing 

@Ultimaodin:
Yeah that's true. To be honest, I have rushed everything. I really want to make something awesome, but I don't have the patience I need to relax and just look at every line I put down
In fact, the spikes are just created by settin a line, another one, another one, not paying attention to the pattern.

So yeah, I'm gonna redo the whole thing. Need to make this one count 
I'll post the line-art soon.

Thanks,
Lorenzo.

PS: Opacus, I saw ur account and I see ur Dutch too. I believe I have spoken you before on msn :O

[venatorinc]

Made the new design, I think it looks way more exciting than the previous.



Crits?

[Ultimaodin]

Looks more like a tribal god to me. In fact I'd love to see this in an amazon ruin. Your lineart is already much better, but his six pack is a bit high up.
Take your time, you will be rewarded in the end. (this comming from me... hmmm)

[Tuna Unleashed]

the angle, pose and overall atmosphere could still be much more dramatic. also he seems to have little to no thighs

[venatorinc]

Looks more like a tribal god to me. In fact I'd love to see this in an amazon ruin. Your lineart is already much better, but his six pack is a bit high up.
Take your time, you will be rewarded in the end. (this comming from me... hmmm)

Hmm, ur right.. Looks kinda like a tribal god indeed.. I think I'm switching to that idea 

I gave him a weapon, and some thighs (Like Tuna Unleashed mentioned)



Should I do the background at last, or should I make rough lineart of that one too, in this same pixel?

[Ultimaodin]

Whoa the left arm (our right) looks very uncomfortable. Try having the elbow still touching the arm and te hand and weapon being only slightly away from the side of the chair. Alternatively try laying the spear across the chair gripped by his left and pointed upward and above his right hand. This gives him the appearance that he is willing and able to defend or attack from his seated position.

[venatorinc]

Editted:


-Weapon stance edit
-Six-Pack lowered

[Ultimaodin]

Much better, the feet are still bothering me though. See how Opacus has his turned out and stick out more on the outsides.

Also just curious what happened to his thumb.

[venatorinc]

Editted the feet, and the thumb. It was already there, but not easy to see

[McClaneGames]

The abdomen seems a little boxy, the body could use some more curves so that it does not have straight outlines.