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Offline adcrusher524

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Ninja Turtle

on: October 04, 2009, 12:55:53 am
Lately, I've been working a ninja turtle, and I think I've improved it as far as I can. Please C&C  :D


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Re: Ninja Turtle

Reply #1 on: October 04, 2009, 09:40:43 am
I see a lot of pillow shading, you should avoid it. Also, the highlights on the legs seems a little strange to me (you probably forgot to recolor that black line on the left leg).
The nunchaku is way too small (it look like dynamite)
Did you use some reference?

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Re: Ninja Turtle

Reply #2 on: October 05, 2009, 12:51:45 am
Thanks MegaLeon!
 Unfortunately, I'm terrible at spotting pillow shading, but I tried my best to find the places it needed to be fixed. I also changed the nunchaku, but I'm not too sure about them.  Changed shading on legs.

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Reply #3 on: October 08, 2009, 08:04:59 am
Hey,
I just love the tmnt. Your sprite has a lot of potential and you made a lot of progress in your second edit.

But there where still some things buggin me:


- I used cartoon shading to increase the readabillity, but i don't know if you were going for that style
- I tried the fix the arms and torso a bit, giving them more correct proportions.
- I also changed the highlight to a more yellowish green.

Hope you like it,
   Ray

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Re: Ninja Turtle

Reply #4 on: October 10, 2009, 01:31:56 pm
woah that's an amazing edit Ray!



tried to fix all of the things you told me to. Thanks a lot!

Please C&C  :D