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Offline sam-uk

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[WIP] Baseball Player

on: September 20, 2009, 07:53:17 am
Here's a lil something I knocked up and I'm basically looking for CC & any advice on making him look more realistic/detailed as opposed to cartoony even at the size it is, cheers.  :yell:


@Lizzrd - your comment helped alot

@Sinistral Erim - tried to bulk the shoulders up


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Re: [WIP] Baseball Player

Reply #1 on: September 20, 2009, 08:11:52 am
The left leg should not bend like that, it should be more like 
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Photocopier: the fact that arne can also code so well
Photocopier: is horrificly unfair

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Re: [WIP] Baseball Player

Reply #2 on: September 20, 2009, 10:55:14 pm
Is he a teenager? The shoulders seem too narrow.

The sprite also lacks volume. Apart from the colored outlines it appears to have no shadows at all. It should be darker at the feet and lighter at the head, also.

I really like his face, though :D but it really contributes to this cartoony feel...