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Offline Kren

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a Background..

on: March 05, 2006, 01:44:15 am
well, I made this for a mockup and i need some help with it i don't know why, but i think something is wrong, C+C needed..

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Re: a Background..

Reply #1 on: March 05, 2006, 09:45:53 am
I think you use too many dithering. Try detailed more the mountains etc...
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Re: a Background..

Reply #2 on: March 05, 2006, 03:55:20 pm
Is this a large cabbage garden?
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Re: a Background..

Reply #3 on: March 05, 2006, 05:06:47 pm
This is...interesting. I'm guessing the green is a forest and the background is mountain and sky. The details are very unclear right now so you might need to develope the forest-form a bit more. Google some arial views of forests for inspiration. Also like Matriax said, the mountains could use more detail/shape.
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Re: a Background..

Reply #4 on: March 05, 2006, 11:07:17 pm
ok thanks, well I made another version with no forest, >_< it's still incomplete, but i wanna know what you think of the mountains

as you can see i added more detail to the small mountains, i might add more, well the big mountain is really incomplete, i will change the colour and add details.
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