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WIP: Sonya

on: September 08, 2009, 09:33:09 pm

i want find a final design of my character,i hope to receive advices from the pro of this forum ^^
rate & fix! thx!

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Re: WIP: Sonya

Reply #1 on: September 08, 2009, 11:18:04 pm
To be honest, I love the deisgn, but things like the unreal shading on the curl in the back of her hair and general odd shape of her head seem a bit offputting.

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Re: WIP: Sonya

Reply #2 on: September 09, 2009, 08:38:09 am


edit. ._.

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Re: WIP: Sonya

Reply #3 on: September 09, 2009, 10:17:52 am
No hips! It's like her waist extends only there the thighs start, it looks .. unwomanly. Give her some hips! : D
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Re: WIP: Sonya

Reply #4 on: September 09, 2009, 11:02:20 am
I think the older one looks nicer in almost every way, especially since her leg doesn't look as bent.

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Re: WIP: Sonya

Reply #5 on: September 09, 2009, 11:37:36 am


edit!

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Re: WIP: Sonya

Reply #6 on: September 09, 2009, 03:05:11 pm
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ri-edit: little fixes

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Re: WIP: Sonya

Reply #7 on: September 09, 2009, 03:20:02 pm
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ri-edit: little fixes
way better than before.
 Still, the head seems a little bit pushed behind with respect of the neck and the torso. See if it makes any difference moving it some pixels to the front.
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Re: WIP: Sonya

Reply #8 on: September 09, 2009, 10:35:42 pm
Another edit.

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Re: WIP: Sonya

Reply #9 on: September 10, 2009, 10:25:43 am
Another edit.

way better than before.
I'm not that sure, but it seems to me that the torso is bending on the left side... maybe it's needed a little correction on that. but I like the position.
I hope someone else will reply here so we can compare our views.
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