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Re: [WIP]Game Hero

Reply #10 on: September 06, 2009, 02:47:00 pm
In my newest version (post before ur post) the scar is easy to spot.

I don't really like your edit, he doesn't look cool or something ( no offense ). The hood is a bit too far away, I admit. I don't really have a problem with the waist, ur edit make it look a little like a midget or something.. :P

I think I still stick to my newest version.

About the background story, I didn't really came up with an idea really. I just wanted a badass main character, in a actiony game. He'll have a cool-looking weapon, so I think I'm going for a slicing maniac or something :P

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Re: [WIP]Game Hero

Reply #11 on: September 10, 2009, 06:18:28 am


Did some shabby edit. I fixed the character's awkward stance.. and you really need to check the some tutorials regarding lines and curves. Your character has already a defining look and that is his hat.. you should simplify the rest that's why i removed that shining belt buckle..

hmm this is frowned upon, but i added few colors for some AA for such a small sprite... Just experimenting  


How about putting a big shadow under the hood?
« Last Edit: September 11, 2009, 01:07:55 am by Froli »

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Re: [WIP]Game Hero

Reply #12 on: September 10, 2009, 01:00:07 pm
Looks like a great edit, and don't get me wrong: yours is perfect, but I was just aming for a simpler style. I know the stance is awkward, I just quickly threw in some legs and arms, I will still fix the stance.

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Re: [WIP]Game Hero

Reply #13 on: September 11, 2009, 08:44:14 pm
Dude, seriously: don't ask for critique if you're not going to use it.