>( I thought you
were a fan of speechbubbles. You're a liar.
The pelican does not look right at all, I prefer the first bird. The pelican seems to upstage the characters in the boat (it's bright colours/crazy exptression), but the original bird seems far less distracting. Perhaps you could also add another cloud somewhere on the right hand side.
The underwater colour looks great, but I think the above water colour could be a bit more green/cyan; right now I think above and below water seem disconnected from eachother.
I'm having trouble working out what the turtle is doing - is he floating or is he standing? I think if he's floating spread his legs out a bit more, or if he's standing put his legs down. Also, maybe some turtle bubbles.
I love the cars, the ominous underwater eyes and the monkey.
Can't wait until this is done
