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long-cabers-trees forest

on: August 01, 2009, 07:45:50 pm
hi guys ,

this is supposed to be a background of a game level.
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Re: long-cabers-trees forest

Reply #1 on: August 05, 2009, 05:49:40 pm
THe tree in the middle is nice, but given the sand turns it seems to lack limbs. a few small ones here and there couldn't hurt. the surrounding ones seem to grow in a pretty unnatural way. I would widen the trunks a bit match,                some branches/limbs here would probabl help to fill in some of that blank space, too.

Further, the whole thing lacks contrast, giving it a very flat feel.