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ima robit

on: March 12, 2006, 10:29:22 pm
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Re: ima robit

Reply #1 on: March 12, 2006, 10:41:42 pm
Were you expecting crit's or comment's, It's usually rude to post any art without saying anything...

The piece look's rushed and unfinished, Nice concept though.. Remind's me of the second boss off Contra III

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Reply #2 on: March 12, 2006, 10:43:58 pm
erm... >.>;;;;
yah uh comments please, maybe some cnc while your at it...
obviously it's a wip, so why did you even say it's rushed?
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Re: ima robit

Reply #3 on: March 12, 2006, 10:49:17 pm
Well, you didn't say it was a wip. Mighta been goin' for that sketchy style or something...
Anyway, it looks great.

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Reply #4 on: March 13, 2006, 03:24:44 am


kinda boring i know, but i wanted to finish this, i like the palette the most, i'm still gonna mess with it some more :)

any cnc on this now?
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Re: ima robit

Reply #5 on: March 13, 2006, 04:19:08 am
I liked the original pose of the robot more than this new pose.
The previous pose looks more alive and gives the robot some character while the new pose makes it look like a stiff skeleton with less dynamic motion.

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Re: ima robit

Reply #6 on: March 13, 2006, 06:02:45 am
I'm gonna have to agree with that last crit--the first post has a lot more personality in it--the shape of the arms and legs are much better as well.

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Re: ima robit

Reply #7 on: March 13, 2006, 06:20:51 am
I'm not really for the first one as I am for the second one - I actually think the second one has more personality.

He looks like one of those intelligent, smart-ass androids in some movies that always correct the protagonist. The first one, to me, says "I am so badass that I don't even HAVE to pose." The personality is just .. obvious. Its too practical.

I say keep the second, but lose the nose. The nose bothers me for some reason.

So cool. I love the dimension like feel you are giving it by applying darker shades to the sides.
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Re: ima robit

Reply #8 on: March 13, 2006, 06:54:17 am
this doesn't need crits much in my opinion, so the edit is uncharacteristic of me for adding more colours. More lightsources, a bit shinyness etc. I love the straight leg arm design, reminds me of a Yukito Kishiro GUNNM manga cyborg.



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Re: ima robit

Reply #9 on: March 13, 2006, 11:55:18 pm
<3

love that edit helm, i wanted it to have more shineyness too it, but this was total expiramental shit i guess, and i didn't really bother with that lighting stuff, love the green tones in there too
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