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Michael Jackson [WIP]

on: July 18, 2009, 04:35:02 pm
3rd Pixel art..

MJ


CnC are welcome! :)
« Last Edit: July 18, 2009, 04:37:02 pm by Drag01 »

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Re: Michael Jackson [WIP]

Reply #1 on: July 19, 2009, 12:25:51 am
Why can't you at least finish filling in the shapes before you post here for crit? Honestly, man.
You got obvious anat issues. Inspect the arm/shoudlers. It's all quite flatly shaded, even lacking interesting contrast. What's with the MC hammer pants? Post your reference, please.

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Re: Michael Jackson [WIP]

Reply #2 on: July 20, 2009, 12:13:06 am


CnC are welcome! :)
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Fuck you, have fun in Nazi Germany, you hyper-sensitive mod faggots.
Who is  the ''hyper-sensetive'' one here?
Sure Mathias had a bit of a cold ''tone'', but that is no reason for sucha an outbreak, You didn't even try to adress the critique that YOU asked for...

Sorry I misread Dragen for Drag01  :-[
If you're still working on this Drag01 check out whatever ref you're using and try to see where your proportions look wierd compared to the Ref, I hope you continue as I  like the face...
« Last Edit: September 30, 2009, 06:16:17 pm by Reo »

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Re: Michael Jackson [WIP]

Reply #3 on: July 20, 2009, 12:37:32 am
I think you should work mostly on how you're shading this. While it's not pillow shading, you're not shading him with any form as of now. None that I can see anyway, so study up. I'm pretty sure there would me a shadow cast on his face considering his fedora, and what's going on with his left (our right) arm? It should be mostly behind his chest, not molded to it. As Mathias mentioned, what's up with the pants? I would feel like a penguin trying to walk in those. That's just the first few things that caught my eye, so if you want, I could do a quick edit to show you how I would shade this guy.

Do what Mathias said to keep working on him, so that we can critique it more appropriately, and, if you used one, post your reference.

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Re: Michael Jackson [WIP]

Reply #4 on: July 20, 2009, 09:29:41 am

Fuck you, have fun in Nazi Germany, you hyper-sensitive mod faggots.

Useless one liners, like the one you previously posted, are deleted to prevent threads getting derailed and keep them mainly for critique.
I dont give a crap what you call us, but for now you'll be getting a strike.
If you don't like it here, the door is open for you to leave.

Now let's keep this on topic.