AuthorTopic: Begin in demoscene... FINISH UPDATE  (Read 32819 times)

Offline Andy Tran

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 I think #3 is better than all the other numbers. Keep up the great work Matriax!

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Well, sorry im very busy with exams :(

This is another preview i made for the logo(Yes again bubles XDDD )



Is only a preview. I will made more variants with other backgrounds, another texture for the text etc...

Now i making the rest of the perspective and coloring the new zones. After i will post the text finished and variants for the texture text.

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I think you should try a different colour for the background, It's nice though something different from sprite's and the like..

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Well another update.



I make the letters with the perspective and added ilumination.

And i make a moon ¿what you think about the moon?. And a ball in the letter "i" i think i need change for a star or anything.

C+C plz

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Sorry for the double post.... No comments? XDDD

Well this is another update.



Updates:
I added more detail in the moon with stars comets etc..
Added a sample of the reflection of a bubble.
I change the point of "I" i think is better the new.
Added som grass.
Added a detail in th letter "X".

I making a tree and flowers to put in the logo, and proof the diferents reflections. Also i thinking to change the letter "T" for a light with reflection o anything.

C+C plz

Offline Filax_666

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You missed a bit when "perspectivating"...that lil bit on the "T", on the upper-middle.

Everything looks very nice, though I especially like the moon. Maybe you should add a secondary lightsource from the light on top of the "I" and scatter some stars in the sky. There's nothing more I can say that would this, you're too ahead of me...oh, and PLEASE remove those bubbles :-\

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Yeah more perspectivating bugs in the cut-outs of the a's.
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Just a tip: You haven't drawed the inside of the letters. For example the A:
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  /_\  <- Inside here, there's no perspective. It locks a little bit flat. It's the same with the R
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lordtaz: i think the letters converge towards the back, the R being in the middle of the perspective grid, hence you see no sides of it.
I say get rid of them bubbes as well, they don't give anything to the piece.
There are no ugly colours, only ugly combinations of colours.

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The "R" is correct. But the A is incorrect yes, thnaks for the comment.

This is a little update wit correct "A" more reflections, and the word "Enter"

And i change again the point of the "i"  :P i think now i like more.



And continue using 11 colours :) .

I think tomorrow i finish all the refelctions and put any plants or a tree in the scene.

c+c plz