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New character for the King of Spriters'06

on: February 14, 2006, 08:49:52 pm
First, hi to all! I'm new in this forums and my first topic go to the acclaimed King Of Spriters '06. C&C are welcome ^^

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Re: New character for the King of Spriters'06

Reply #1 on: February 14, 2006, 10:09:12 pm
The portrait may be too big.
And I am finally seeing that you were the one worth eating.

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Re: New character for the King of Spriters'06

Reply #2 on: February 15, 2006, 12:19:28 pm
Nice cartoony design and colors, 'tis pretty. It looks a bit weird that his head is on fire, but it casts no light on it's surroundings (shading on the shoulders and arm should change accordingly, if you decide to do this). And maybe you could try adding a little transition between the fire and the skin on his neck.
The hand on the portrait looks broken, it's too twisted downward, and the finger is lacking a few "segments". Maybe rotate the hand away from us, or up a bit.

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Re: New character for the King of Spriters'06

Reply #3 on: February 15, 2006, 01:34:43 pm
It's not fire on his head, it's only a mask, If the head was on fire I would have animated it. Thanks for the comments, I'll work on the structure of the hand.

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Re: New character for the King of Spriters'06

Reply #4 on: March 09, 2006, 07:08:44 am
I edited the portrait..

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Re: New character for the King of Spriters'06

Reply #5 on: March 09, 2006, 07:13:44 am
Nice!!! :D

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Re: New character for the King of Spriters'06

Reply #6 on: March 09, 2006, 07:51:20 am
Please don't post when all you have to say is 'nice!!! ::D'. This is a critique-based forum, please make an effort to discuss the art in some detail when you post. Further one-liners will be deleted.