Eleckid

[Quake]

Normally i don't do this but i think it'll help with C+C etc..
Anyway, i've been playing a lot of pokemon diamond and i'd really like to get into some pokemon drawing. (also thanks to Tvyon, which finally inspired me)
I do think the picture is of a screenshot, but i can't really remember since i saw it about a week ago.

I'd really like C+C on how to make the thunderpunch look more like thunder, and anything else you can see i would be grateful 

Colours taken from Ampharos


Colours from Elekid (pokemon platinum)

[coffee]

Hey Quake!

I did a edit on the first one with colours from Ampharos:

New:  Old:

I changed the lightnings colour from yellow to blue, to give it a more electric feeling and I don't really think lightning is that dark yellow. Also, to not make it very messy I changed the whole "bolt" so it looks more "controlled", I think the old one looks a lot like a sun or just a flower. The picture got some strange outlines too, so I fixed that by just putting a dark outline on the shaded side and a bit brighter blue outline on the bolt side. I put a blue light too on the left (his right) side to not just make it look more effectfull, but to take away the flatness.

I hope you find this helpfull, tho my crappy english! 

[Quake]

Thank you very much 

I've done the edit from what you said..

Don't know whether the lightning is too uhm, controlled.

[Quake]

Just edited the colours and smoothed out the shading 



WIP  animation


Anything else i can improve?

[Emtch]

Where'd the contrast go???

Also, you still have that angular shading I mentioned before. Makes his body look pointy.