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Re: Hobo Heaven

Reply #10 on: June 05, 2009, 01:28:31 pm
right now the perspective is at eye-level which I prefer over EvilEye vanishing point suggestion (which was a little bit lower than mine)

so... if there's anything else that needs corrections, I'll post it on pj :)

PS: thanks everyone for the comments
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Re: Hobo Heaven

Reply #11 on: June 06, 2009, 04:36:48 am
Ah, so that's what you mean evileye, I wasn't sure either, but also wasn't paying any attention to the direction of the sides of the stone's edges, which yes, does give obvious perspective clues. But actually, the whole rendered image looks orthographic to me, having little or no perspective distortion so it doesn't seem that wrong, even though it technically is. Hmm, the shopping cart indicates some diminishing. This "flatness" isn't necessarily an "interest-booster", but it's not a crime either.

Peach, nice tweaks and better palette. Sure to be a contender, good job, man.
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Re: Hobo Heaven

Reply #12 on: June 06, 2009, 07:43:45 pm
thanks  ;D

I've submitted it to the week compo:
http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/43562.htm

Thanks everyone  :y:
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