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Offline Opacus

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Vertical shooter-Three battle ships

on: February 09, 2006, 02:49:38 pm

For a game I'm making with gamemaker.
13 colours including transperacey.

C&C apreciated.

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Re: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships

Reply #1 on: February 09, 2006, 06:44:44 pm
Neat ship designs. I like the middle one the most. Are you going to be making a mockup with them soon?

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Re: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships

Reply #2 on: February 09, 2006, 07:28:41 pm
I might do that, yes.
But Im having some problem with nature objects.
Im very bad at trees and rocks and stuff.
Furthermore, I AM actually making a game with these,
Im working on it right now.

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Re: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships

Reply #3 on: February 10, 2006, 04:44:44 am
The third one looks odd. Like it has more defined outlines than the other two. It's pretty much shaded differently too, methinks.

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Re: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships

Reply #4 on: February 10, 2006, 07:00:26 am
Probably cause it has some more round forms.

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Re: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships

Reply #5 on: February 10, 2006, 03:27:05 pm
I love the designs, but I think your contrast is a little low.  This is making the ships looks a little flattened out and grey...  If you just increase the range between colours, they should really "pop" more with a lot of depth.

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Re: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships

Reply #6 on: February 11, 2006, 05:46:43 am
 Nice sihps you made there. The ships would need more conttrast, yes. Since metallic surfaces are applied, they should have high contrast and less shades.

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Re: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships

Reply #7 on: February 11, 2006, 06:57:08 pm


I agree with the posts calling for more contrast.  I did an edit with just a bit of a contrast hike and I added a bit of white around the edges.
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