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Offline Sly

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Some Tiles (need critique)

on: May 04, 2009, 12:11:06 am
I have been working on some tiles recently and need some critique.

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Re: Some Tiles (need critique)

Reply #1 on: May 04, 2009, 12:18:44 am
Avoid Pillow Shading.

It's noticeable on everything, besides the lone grass tile, of course.

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Re: Some Tiles (need critique)

Reply #2 on: May 15, 2009, 05:16:26 pm
Okay thanks.

It took me awhile to get around to fix this but here it is.



Sorry for the white box.
« Last Edit: May 15, 2009, 05:32:16 pm by Sly »
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Re: Some Tiles (need critique)

Reply #3 on: May 15, 2009, 05:26:29 pm
Okay thanks.

It took me awhile to get around to fix this but here it is.



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Re: Some Tiles (need critique)

Reply #4 on: May 15, 2009, 05:31:57 pm
 :-[ Sorry about that... I should have used my Photobucket in the first place...

Here it is.



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Re: Some Tiles (need critique)

Reply #5 on: May 15, 2009, 07:25:52 pm
oh wow thats a huge improvement :D! my critique, add more contrast to the grass, and more detail to the cliffs right now it looks plain. This might help:

edit: you are using too many colours, maybe you saved it in a wrong format or something..
« Last Edit: May 15, 2009, 07:40:37 pm by Kren »

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Re: Some Tiles (need critique)

Reply #6 on: May 15, 2009, 08:07:33 pm
Whao. Holy crap I did... Another noobish mistake... :( 
I think it's my Photobucket because I just uploaded it and checked it before I did.
Reuploaded



I put my Palate there too. I'm trying to get a GBA chibi like feel.

I'm gonna work on the cliffs using that picture. :)
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