Mettaur WIP-Crits needed=]

[KuroRyuzaki]

WIP Any crits?

[Tuna Unleashed]

Looks p. sexy so far. My only issue is that the body is too small and the helmet is too short.

[KuroRyuzaki]

Tuna your a strange one=] i know this off topic but its werid how you use to pixel and now =p your great well compard to me iv seen some off your old sprite inc work its scary=p/thanks for the crits il try and fix it

[KuroRyuzaki]

[JonathanOfDrain]

I think you need to look at your reference a bit more.

I made a rough edit. You need to make that hat a little taller. Scrap those red eyes, just pointless putting them in there.

My edit isn't perfect but a few things need to be pointed out.


Clean that black line up. I've always imagined these bots were the most miserable off all bots. I think the eyes should convey that.  Don't they have mouths too?
I think my hat is too tall.

You might want to study the original sprites Capcom made of this guy.

[KuroRyuzaki]

wow thank you o.o 

[JonathanOfDrain]

Don't thank me words, thank me with results.

Let me see something that takes everything you learned from my edit and make it better. Feel free to do a little experimenting if you want. This board can be really useful to those who do a lot of work themselves. You can learn a lot just by ready other posts. I hope to see something nice from you soon.


EDIT:
What are you making this piece for? Is it for a game or simply for practice? I think knowing the purpose of this could really help the critiques.

[KuroRyuzaki]

Just for Pratice =] im working on it now

[Tuna Unleashed]

Yeah, you made it worse with that update kuro. You made the feet misshapen and the eyes weird and at a wrong angle. IMO you should forget that one and work at the original again.

[Koi Kami Mauro]

Are you going for Mega Man Mettaur or Mega Man Battle Network Mettaur?