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Offline KuroRyuzaki

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Mettaur WIP-Crits needed=]

on: April 11, 2009, 06:10:54 pm


WIP Any crits?

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Re: Mettaur WIP-Crits needed=]

Reply #1 on: April 11, 2009, 08:22:13 pm
Looks p. sexy so far. My only issue is that the body is too small and the helmet is too short.

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Re: Mettaur WIP-Crits needed=]

Reply #2 on: April 11, 2009, 09:59:55 pm
Tuna your a strange one=] i know this off topic but its werid how you use to pixel and now =p your great well compard to me iv seen some off your old sprite inc work its scary=p/thanks for the crits il try and fix it

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Re: Mettaur WIP-Crits needed=] Update

Reply #3 on: April 11, 2009, 11:47:27 pm

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Re: Mettaur WIP-Crits needed=]

Reply #4 on: April 12, 2009, 12:28:56 am
I think you need to look at your reference a bit more.

I made a rough edit. You need to make that hat a little taller. Scrap those red eyes, just pointless putting them in there.

My edit isn't perfect but a few things need to be pointed out.


Clean that black line up. I've always imagined these bots were the most miserable off all bots. I think the eyes should convey that.  Don't they have mouths too?
I think my hat is too tall.

You might want to study the original sprites Capcom made of this guy.

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Re: Mettaur WIP-Crits needed=]

Reply #5 on: April 12, 2009, 01:46:23 am
wow thank you o.o 

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Re: Mettaur WIP-Crits needed=]

Reply #6 on: April 12, 2009, 02:55:00 am
Don't thank me words, thank me with results.

Let me see something that takes everything you learned from my edit and make it better. Feel free to do a little experimenting if you want. This board can be really useful to those who do a lot of work themselves. You can learn a lot just by ready other posts. I hope to see something nice from you soon.


EDIT:
What are you making this piece for? Is it for a game or simply for practice? I think knowing the purpose of this could really help the critiques.
« Last Edit: April 12, 2009, 08:09:32 am by JonathanOfDrain »

Offline KuroRyuzaki

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Re: Mettaur WIP-Crits needed=]

Reply #7 on: April 12, 2009, 12:45:45 pm
Just for Pratice =] im working on it now

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Re: Mettaur WIP-Crits needed=]

Reply #8 on: April 12, 2009, 02:10:45 pm
Yeah, you made it worse with that update kuro. You made the feet misshapen and the eyes weird and at a wrong angle. IMO you should forget that one and work at the original again.

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Re: Mettaur WIP-Crits needed=]

Reply #9 on: April 17, 2009, 05:07:29 pm
Are you going for Mega Man Mettaur or Mega Man Battle Network Mettaur?