[WIPY]

[PASSOUT]

Well I had a some what of an artist block like I do every day so I decided to pick a random thing. That thing was a finch. Random right? Anyway if you can't already tell it's a bird eating a stranded guy on an island. I just relizied to make the island more beach like instead of rocky. Oh and the bird is rather badly detailed. So yeah help now! please

[JonathanOfDrain]

Even though you've broken through your artist block you still should put effort into this. It reads terribly. My cousin and I thought it was a bird eating a worm eating a glass bottle. Then we thought it had and elongated neck or a weird beak.
Use color and value to separate things a bit. If it's separated it's probably a different creature/object.


The bird's body looks fine.

[PASSOUT]

Thanks, Yeah the guys holding a message in a bottle.


Yeah,

[JonathanOfDrain]

So he's almost entirely eaten, makes sense once you point it out.

Last time I ate a human being there was a lot of blood. Just saying.