[WIP] Future soldier

[ZeroXbot]

I'm now working on front-standing future soldier: (It's my first person that i'm pixeling, I drawed armor without any reference)

I have problems mainly with shading arms and legs (I cut arms because they were very odd looking. I add them later when they become more arms ). Also I don't know is everything right with other parts. Please C&C.

[ZeroXbot]

Update:

[Chief]

meh, im nub, so i dunno, but imo, his arms and legs ar a bit too long and scrawny...

[ZeroXbot]

Yeah, you're right. I looked some human's anatomy proportions also and must change arms and legs build.  Thanks.

[ZeroXbot]

New version:

I'm waiting for new C&C.

[hsn2555]

his arms are still too long, and his hands are too big.

[bonehead11]

Body is too long...and giving him some pose would be really good + a weapon.

[ALTER]

arms should be infront of the body, not behind

[willfaulds]

I had a quick doddle over your piece - quite a bit of cut & paste really.

So frame by frame
1/ Yours
2/ Made a basic anatomy fix for the length of the body.
3/ Repositioned eyes to be more human like
4/ Gave the shoulder pads a bit more depth and purpose
5/ Reduced the width of his lower arms
6/ Gave the crotch armour a similar treatment to the shoulder pads
7/ Perspective of feet
8/ Decided I preferred the high neck feeling (More robotic)
9/ Decided I preferred the high eyes

So hopefully that highlights some of the problem areas. No perfect fixes just ideas and illustrating points.