Hey EvilEye, this piece is shaping up well. I like the new hair a lot. Also, the face itself is steadily improving. The main problem is that the neck is rotated at a crazy angle, and so it is not immediately apparent that she is looking over her shoulder. It first looks like her upper body is all messed up. I think the shoulder would look better turned around, like this:
I'm actually into the over the shoulder pose, but her face just doesn't seem to be at the right angle (get up and try to turn your head like that). Also, try and see the body as if it is facing us, then it suddenly becomes crazy, like an optical illusion. That alternate way of seeing it is going to be how a lot of people initially see it, and that will hurt the piece overall.
