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Coldblooded, Sythe wielding, killer.

on: March 28, 2009, 05:03:05 pm


Does the dress look alright, or should I put her in a different outfit?
Any critique is both welcomed and wanted.
« Last Edit: March 28, 2009, 07:07:44 pm by Kcilc »

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Re: Coldedblooded, Sythe wielding, killer.

Reply #1 on: March 28, 2009, 05:39:20 pm
The bottom looks like she might be wearing a red trench coat instead of a dress. Move the slit to the side of her leg if you want it to look more dress-like.

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Re: Coldedblooded, Sythe wielding, killer.

Reply #2 on: March 28, 2009, 05:41:15 pm
Coldblooded? Oh well it looks great, but one thing bugs me...she is holding it awkward, I would suggest giving her left hand underhand grip and right hand overhand grip so it would look more natural otherwise the dress looks awesome.

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Re: Coldblooded, Sythe wielding, killer.

Reply #3 on: March 28, 2009, 07:43:00 pm


I mostly polished stuff, and also worked a lot more on the hands and forearms.

@Zuonius;
Good call, I didn't notice that before. Does it look more like a dress now?

@bonehead11;
Yeah, that's what I meant  :-[ *fixes*
The way I have the hands now is actually pretty comfortable, try it out. The reason, I think, why it looked unnatural was my sloppy pixel pushing, so hopefully the hands look better now.
« Last Edit: March 28, 2009, 11:29:19 pm by Kcilc »

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Re: Coldblooded, Sythe wielding, killer.

Reply #4 on: April 01, 2009, 04:16:05 pm
That's not exactly what I meant. I should have linked a pic.

Here's one: http://www.comparestoreprices.co.uk/images/pi/pink-piranha-side-slit-long-dress-black-one-size.jpg

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Re: Coldblooded, Sythe wielding, killer.

Reply #5 on: April 01, 2009, 04:32:52 pm
Hi !
Colors are really nice and I like your style.
But there's an obvious anatomy problem about the belly

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Re: Coldblooded, Sythe wielding, killer.

Reply #6 on: April 01, 2009, 05:26:46 pm
Hi !
Colors are really nice and I like your style.
But there's an obvious anatomy problem about the belly



umm she looks way fatter o.O

left-side of her chest -likely- extracted,fill the blank
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Re: Coldblooded, Sythe wielding, killer.

Reply #7 on: April 02, 2009, 01:39:00 am
Edit on the upper body and the scythe blade. Pretty self explanatory:



Hope that helps!

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Re: Coldblooded, Sythe wielding, killer.

Reply #8 on: April 02, 2009, 08:05:12 am
Wow, after I saw your edit, tehwexxlorz, the terrible realization of her paper flatness hit me like a brick, ouch.

Dropped two colors darkening and rearranging her outfit. I really tried to get a stoic vibe going; have I succeeded?

Thanks so much for all of your critique and edits, guys, they really help a lot!




« Last Edit: April 02, 2009, 08:17:58 am by Kcilc »

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Re: Coldblooded, Sythe wielding, killer.

Reply #9 on: April 02, 2009, 01:24:09 pm
The design is a little monotone right now... you've got her flesh-colored skin and everything else is the same purple color. I would try to work one more distinct hue in there, maybe put some trim on her clothes or some tassley-flowy-things on the weapon.
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