Character Art

[Souly]

Regardless if it's for practice this is too big. :/
Size it down, it'll look better.

[official-neosoft]

It's not only for practice, also for fun.. I've practiced before on smaller models..
And I'm not in the mood to size this down...


I think he's leaning more now..

[official-neosoft]

I know. But if I'm making a game character out of him, I want him to have 2 swords.
I can't pick eyes...
Which one is the best out of these 4? (They're not very detailed )

Fourth one the body isnt visible, but it's about the eyes.
Also u can see a little bit of the shading.

[Quake]

first definitely :}
i do suggest you start some anatomy practise, i started roughly a week ago and it can help your art dramatically :}

I started using this  to practise anatomy, hope it helps.

http://timflanagan.deviantart.com/art/Basic-Male-Torso-Tutorial-4751669

[official-neosoft]

Ok I'll try that tutorial

And I agree using the first eye 

[official-neosoft]

I tried, this is what I've made in my first try using that tutorial
Took about 10 minutes..

[Quake]

I did an edit, i know that the neck length, and various other parts aren't in the right proportions.. but i wasn't sure whether you was aiming for that so i kept it the same. One main problem on my edit.

I do think it's easier if you do it on a piece of paper and scan it in..
eg. What i did last night http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p181/tikeshe/musl1.png *excuse the arm, there's some problems there i need to work on *

Nonetheless, i think this way is the best.

My edit, just take what you want.. hope it did help..

[Emtch]

Dude, clean your lines. The shapes look very random too, especially the head.
Take a look at Quake's edit, he solved some of those problems.

@Quake:
It looks too feminine, the collar bone is messed up, the chest muscles are too high, and the hips are weird.

[official-neosoft]

My thingy I showed of that wasn't cleaned because I'm not working on that one. It was a quickly done anatomy piece
I'm focusing on my big piece.

[Mathias]

It's not only for practice, also for fun.. I've practiced before on smaller models..
And I'm not in the mood to size this down...

Not in the mood?! Mood's a thing for cattle and love play... not fighting!