Loli animation help

[mozzy]

Only two now. But still crap!

[Twinspiration]

Supposed to be a fast midair sword slashing animation.

I think the problem is that the sword appears to be attached to the guy's shoulder.

Only two now. But still crap!

It currently looks like the little guy's madly flailing his arm around (painfully!)

So I edited an actual sword into the frames.



Apologies if I missed the entire point.
Love how cute the characters are though.

[mozzy]

Getting better?

[EvilEye]

It's good, but it looks like hes swinging a sickle ( sp? ) now.

[Atnas]

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Some various things... One of which is concerning the motion blur is that I added it to the two extremes, basically you had them one away from where I would have placed them. I also added some delay to the frames that had the blur so it was less confusing to the eyes. Some arm editing. Didn't touch the legs, though they jerk around and should be more stable.

[mozzy]

changed a few thing here and there.

finished?

[Emtch]

It still looks like she's doing the twist. Make the legs steadier.

[DJ gman]

I think you might be looking for something closer to this.

[Jad]

I'd reccomend you put the slash trail closer to where you want the blade to hit the enemy - that way it looks less like flailing and more like aimed hits. It's all psychological, really.

[mozzy]

Thanks DJ, looks so much better now.

Jad, sorry I don't really get what you mean :<