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Offline Saffron

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Assorted Characters

on: March 15, 2009, 07:40:00 pm


1. Zombie - Says, "aaauuuggh" a lot.

2. Saffron Steve - A plumber who repairs things in a sweaty, inappropriate, yet correct manner. Can also see into the future with magical eyes of destiny.

3. Satan - A jerk whose only mission in life is to stop Saffron Steve from repairing things efficentially.

4. Plato - An adorable dog.

5. Guy - A man who survived a zombie apocolypse and is avenging the death of his dog, Plato.

Critique?
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Re: Assorted Characters

Reply #1 on: March 15, 2009, 09:42:11 pm
I really like Plato and Guy :)
The zombie seems like he has an utensil in his hand, whereas it is his forearm (if I'm not mistaken), and the pose could be exagerated twofold. Satan looks a lot like Saffron.
I'm definitely looking forward to progress.
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Re: Assorted Characters

Reply #2 on: March 15, 2009, 10:53:59 pm
Nice.  Very minimal.  I'd suggest moving Satan's pitchfork from in front of his body and see if it looks better. 

On the zombie, the arm with the bones needs some tweaking.  It's either too low or too far towards his back.  It doesn't match the angle of the other characters.  Maybe the zombie's orange shirt should show down his back? 
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