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Ajar

on: February 01, 2006, 04:14:38 am


Yeah, it's a jar. Looks to be a bit amazed and perhaps a bit scared for his once jelly filled life.

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Re: Ajar

Reply #1 on: February 01, 2006, 11:56:09 am
sweet (in all its meanings ^^)

I think i know what he is afraid of:
It's Bernd the Bread

reminds me a bit of your Avatar  ::)

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Re: Ajar

Reply #2 on: February 01, 2006, 11:56:29 am
The picture is very nice, the colors too...
But, in my opinion, the black border is very ugly !

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Re: Ajar

Reply #3 on: February 01, 2006, 10:02:42 pm
Huh!? Whats that i've posted!? Yeah i have been away for a while due to technical faults :S STUPID ISP!!!!!! I'm back now though. Anyway! I LOVE THIS! As you know Blick i love ur line arts and i love your style! I think you could work with the back of the throat it stands out too much i think needs to be mellowed down like the rest of the colours. Very nice.

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Re: Ajar

Reply #4 on: February 02, 2006, 12:13:26 am
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I think you could work with the back of the throat it stands out too much i think needs to be mellowed down like the rest of the colours.
Yeah, I knew people were going to point that out the second I showed it =X I didn't want to add a color and I wanted to keep my black outline so I chose between either keeping the black for the line or bringing down the black to a dark red and lose the outline. I don't think I'll change it right yet due to laziness, but you are right in that it stands out too much.

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Re: Ajar

Reply #5 on: February 04, 2006, 06:08:21 am
My opinion: the dark outline, gives the object more focus. Besides, I'm a general proponent of black outlines in general, so you may consider that statement biased.
But I certainly like the piece. The base looks like it could use a bit of AA, do you have a middle shade available for that?

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Re: Ajar

Reply #6 on: February 04, 2006, 06:19:11 am
I'm not sure what you mean. If you mean AA the base to where it meets the white, it is AAed. Although I never know how well I AA, since I just eyeball it and hope it's right.

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Re: Ajar

Reply #7 on: February 04, 2006, 08:16:37 pm
That very wacky epression, quite a nice piece. After seeing that however, I don't think I can pick up another jar again. *shudders*

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Re: Ajar

Reply #8 on: February 06, 2006, 09:29:43 am
sweet (in all its meanings ^^)

I think i know what he is afraid of:
It's Bernd the Bread

reminds me a bit of your Avatar  ::)
haha bernd das brot ^^
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