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Why So McSerious??

on: March 08, 2009, 02:23:57 am
Work in progress of my entry to pixeljoint's 2-face challenge.
Here me have Ronald McDonald vs. The Joker.  Your happy meals will be be the same again.



Obviously i havent done the jokers half yet, and there will be some kind of shoulders too.

All critique and comments appreciated.


« Last Edit: March 14, 2009, 03:53:43 am by Feron »

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Re: Why So McSerious?? : [wip]

Reply #1 on: March 08, 2009, 03:27:55 am
Im in love with this concept. You are a very awesome person for doing this. One thing that bugs me is the aa around ronald's scar (?) it looks awkward to me on the face, but thats just a small nit pick. Something about the shading on his lips as well looks odd to me. Maybe its the darkest shade?

Otherwise it looks great.

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Re: Why So McSerious?? : [wip]

Reply #2 on: March 08, 2009, 05:35:40 am
Ear is too low on hedgers head, not sure I like the transition between might be a bit too harsh of a line, iunno.
Seems a bit off too, could go in one pixel to the left on his chin.
Looking good.

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Re: Why So McSerious?? : [wip]

Reply #3 on: March 12, 2009, 04:26:35 pm
This is my favorite concept out of the whole group, too bad you haven't had time to finish and enter it. Despite a few very well pixelled entries this should win, due to the strong concept. I'm especially amused by the title, hehe.

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Re: Why So McSerious?? : [wip]

Reply #4 on: March 12, 2009, 05:39:03 pm
Just to let you know, whilst i didn't make the challenge entry deadline due to heavy assignments and a few other things, I have done a bit more work on it and will hopefully finish it off at the weekend.

Thanks for critique and the nice comments.

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Re: Why So McSerious??

Reply #5 on: March 14, 2009, 03:54:22 am
Update



dithered a lot of the joker's half to get a dirty/rough look.



Also, post number 1111  :D
« Last Edit: March 14, 2009, 03:56:50 am by Feron »

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Re: Why So McSerious??

Reply #6 on: March 14, 2009, 04:01:30 am
He has a very dull expression atm, which kinda takes away from the whole sinister idea imo. You could make him angry, or worryingly gleefull, or downright sad. I have a feeling an extreme emotion would have a better effect in a piece like this. I think you need to contrast the facial structure some more also, show more shapes and add more depth.

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Re: Why So McSerious??

Reply #7 on: March 14, 2009, 04:24:18 am
kinda like this??



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Re: Why So McSerious??

Reply #8 on: March 14, 2009, 09:49:42 am
Still rather dull.
How about something like this:

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Re: Why So McSerious??

Reply #9 on: March 14, 2009, 10:39:27 am
I like the idea. I think the facial distortion must be much more drastic for the joker vibe to be conveyed