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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #110 on: March 29, 2009, 04:16:16 am
Hairlip? Mind elaborating?
Edit: oh, you mean this?


A hairlip is a birth defect that causes the upper lip to be deformed. With the indention below the nose being so defined and connecting to the mouth, it looks like he has no upper lip. This is my biggest problem with the pic now and it's a small one, so that great. Great job. Oh, and it's time to clean the hair up now, too much detail and stray pixels.

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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #111 on: March 29, 2009, 05:20:54 am
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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #112 on: March 29, 2009, 01:25:14 pm

I hope this helps you. Just trying to rectify anatomy and stuff...
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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #113 on: March 29, 2009, 02:20:20 pm
Chris... uhmm, that's kind of scary, to be honest.

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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #114 on: March 29, 2009, 04:05:03 pm
I'm pretty late when I say this, but...

The ambient light should be on the hair too. And I'm pretty sure the skin wouldn't have multiple highlights like that, even if there are multiple lights in the room. I mean, it would effect it, but it wouldn't look like that.

Another thing about the blue; blend it with the skin tone.
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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #115 on: March 29, 2009, 04:08:25 pm
->TU: Ignore the stupid expression on his face ;)
I would like you to notice the cheekbone and the frowning more though. As well as the hairline. I changed the expression because the last one made him look uncomfortable (well, the lip area looked quite scrunched up and incorrect, especially those lines that mark the sides of the mouth).
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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #116 on: March 29, 2009, 06:41:34 pm
I don't know, that cheekbone looks TOO defined, like he's biting his cheek really hard. I'll try and fix all the other stuff (yours too Gleefk)

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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #117 on: March 29, 2009, 06:55:56 pm
Just do a little jag for the cheekbone. It'll do the job. Two strokes.
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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #118 on: March 29, 2009, 07:22:23 pm
I was talking about the big round crease you have, not the little one.

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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #119 on: March 29, 2009, 07:32:45 pm
Oops, missed a word out, I meant, "Just do a little jag..."
The mouth area doesn't look right, it's not a really credible expression.
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