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Offline bonehead11

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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #140 on: April 03, 2009, 07:40:18 pm
I would suggest for you to remove his...expression or totally change his face because he now looks like his face muscles are paralyzed. Look into the mirror when you are angry, your eybrow gets down, nose rises,cheekbones change etc. etc. now the only thing you have changed is mouth + the version without expression looked alot better...and try to position the ear more up as rawsushis edit...keep up the good work.
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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #141 on: April 07, 2009, 02:44:20 am

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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #142 on: April 07, 2009, 01:00:33 pm
Got a bit of Max Payne constipation action going here, huh? I really don't like that expression, it looks very forced.

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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #143 on: April 07, 2009, 10:40:49 pm

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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #144 on: April 08, 2009, 11:48:10 am
I've been watching this thread for a while now, and I have to say that the progress you've made so far is great:



The more you practice and start thinking in terms of anatomy, the less effort something like this will become. Keep up the great work!
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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #145 on: April 08, 2009, 12:43:48 pm

Just for fun.
I have to say you're right though. I've started to look at my, and other's, artwork in a bit of a different way and the other day I evem used a muscle chart as a reference off of instinct.
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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #146 on: April 14, 2009, 09:04:49 pm
Congratulations for hanging on and keeping up an open mind to accept critique and the vitality to rework your art! The improvement is overwhelming. Keep in mind the core lessons you've heard here when working in future art, and you'll see your skills progress greatly as well as the quality of your art.

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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #147 on: April 14, 2009, 09:38:33 pm
Oh yeah, I nearly forgot. Tiny little update.

Would you guys say this is finished?

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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #148 on: April 14, 2009, 10:12:00 pm
I kinda feel like you could do a bit more on the hair; it seems less detailed than the face below it.  Still, the progression of the portrait has been pretty epic; it's been a real pleasure to watch it develop.

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Re: Revamping Hammerman

Reply #149 on: April 14, 2009, 11:08:02 pm
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