The Inn - [wip]

[zi]

Something like extension of old work Water Mill. This is Inn on which I work in free time. Need some farm houses for the animals.

Many areas aren't ready, well isn't situated, idea of the trees is from Arachne, need more inhabitants and current maybe need repairs, maybe need more contrast. Also some elements like strap of the horse are missing, earth is just to have some background ets., but if you have some crits will be pleasure for me.



PS
The colours was 32 before I add 1 strong blue and 1 strong red for musketeers.

[fil_razorback]

You've made great progress since the previous one. I like this.
Maybe you should keep an eye on the dirt, not to make it too noisy or contrasty but good work ; keep it up.

[Dusty]

I love how even though you could have easily just copy/pasted two instances of your tree, you didn't.

Oh, and the lightsource on the trees opposite of the rest of the scene.

[zi]

That is enough to read about progress fil_razorback, thanks I'll try to clear it.

Some progress. Wooden fence need portal. I'm afraid that cattle-shed have too big area with empty roof. This buildings are simple, but maybe must think for something more!

[blumunkee]

Nice.

I would like to see some grass texture. You could hint at a grass texture on the outline of the shadows and throw a few patches here and there.

[Souly]

Zi you aboslutly blow me away, your work is always so fresh and clean.
The wood panels and roofing is just gorgeous.

Ace stuff as always, keep it up dude. 

[Hydronium]

Your work's great--I especially like the purplish shadows... I think it adds a lot of dimension and interest not to have just straight color ramps. I also love the shadow cast by the balcony dealie on the main building.

However, the trees really pop out (in a bad way). They seem overly contrast-y and even a bit shiny with the yellow highlights and blueish-greenish shadows. I'd substitute the highly saturated yellow-greens for something softer and perhaps more blue.

I also think you don't need to delineate every leaf on the viney things scattered about the grounds. Leaves aren't always neatly separated; more overlap could make them look more natural.

But keep up the great pixelling!

[KAT]

Mmmm I love those kind of arts Will you make better grass of smthing? Or maybe you can add some animations?

[zi]

blumunkee I plan to make some small places with grass when I need.
Hydronium change 2 green which come from the shadows over the wall and was good for shadow places, but was very cold for sunny, also suggest me to change cold blue for shadows with more purple.
Souly Thanks will try to keep so fresh and clean - that is what I want to improve
KAT here is small idea for cyclic animation ... maybe to the end will make more.


some update with replaced colours.

[McClaneGames]

Nice, now finish the grass!