The Grass, the Tree, and I.

[Overkill]

Here is the line art of a tree that I drew about a year ago. I don't know why I didn't finish this and give it a color treatment, it had the potential.



If somebody could fix the bark lines or at least tell me how I can fix them, it would rock. I've tried and failed to get them to look properly.

Comments and/or criticism?

[Xion]

Have you looked at real trees? If not, I definately suggest doing so. In some areas it seems like the branches taper before flaring out again. Try making the bark lines wrap around the tree and make the branches more numerous and outwardly.
Your grass is madness...in a kind of bad way. I can't really help you with that, but try remaking the grass from scratch. Maybe someone else can help you with that, though.