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Ryumaru · **Reply #30 on:** March 10, 2009, 04:53:50 am

Scene as in demoscene? then yes. But from what I see of those the entire logo is a piece of art itself and then must more importantly deal with focus and composition more so than being readable. Graffiti is the similar for the most part. A logo for a video game that might be on the screen for 2 seconds before the player presses the start button is a different story. I stressed the readability part of the logo because the artistic part is already well done.

Mathias · **Reply #31 on:** March 15, 2009, 03:17:25 am

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Atnas · **Reply #32 on:** March 15, 2009, 07:45:41 pm

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everything's stinkin' grey

You could try adding some warm colors to the astronaut. It would work better as a costume design because uh lol where is the light being reflected from in the cold desolate asteroid field. Or even if his design doesn't change I'm sure you could fit a red in the fire. If that fails then you could make the jet REALLY BRIGHT so the player knows where his dude is at.

demo:

(non C64 colors)

Chris2balls · **Reply #33 on:** March 15, 2009, 09:35:23 pm

I would use more green on the guy, maybe replace the grey by green, as well as adding red. I'd look back at Eyecraft's chart (it's very handy, in fact I used it for a C64 piece... in fact I'll say THANK YOU! Eyecraft for such a constructive sheet)
Anyway, this is turning out well

Mathias · **Reply #34 on:** March 16, 2009, 01:32:38 am

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skw · **Reply #35 on:** March 16, 2009, 10:42:00 am

Whoah! Good to see you didn't give up this one, it's coming along pretty nicely! I like the new HUD, these Japanese marks make it feel even more oldschool! You could utilize them, though -- maybe make some power-ups, four types of them, and if the player gathers them all you're rewarded with an 1UP. The marks (e.g. glowing) would then signalize how many you have right now.

Mathias · **Reply #36 on:** March 29, 2009, 11:59:04 am

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Mathias · **Reply #37 on:** April 30, 2009, 05:56:14 pm

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Chris2balls · **Reply #38 on:** April 30, 2009, 06:42:40 pm

Looking good. Are you going to keep this single pixel or do you intend to remake it widepixel?
I had problems working out the scene, and had problems identifying the turquoise/green stuff as thrust, and that he wasn't hovering for example. Try and convey speed more through perspective or blur. I think the thunder should be more geometric and thinner (it looks like an explosion).

Mathias · **Reply #39 on:** April 30, 2009, 08:07:52 pm

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