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manticore WIP *Updated 19/01-06*

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mrmean:

Previus stages:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v453/mrmean/5.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v453/mrmean/7.png

i used this image for the base/pose http://www.exzooberance.com/virtual%20zoo/they%20walk/lion/Lion%20485061.jpg
time dedicated: about 3.5hours

as you can see im having problems with the paws
c&c plz

Helm:
my critique: it's not finished.

reydragk:
ummm...add shading and selout?  As helm said, it's not really close enough to being done to properly critique...

Xion:
The wings look a bit too curved to me right now...maybe shell-like? They should be more pointy and batlike. Dragony.

It seems to me that you've begun AAing too soon.

The eyes should be lower...just a bit...maybe 1....2 px?

Make him fluffy...I feel like hugging something fluffy.

mrmean:
updated ^^
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v453/mrmean/9.png

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