Hey you! VIKINGS!

[RichardisRaving]

what would you do to make this better?

[PASSOUT]

Well I would:

Move the mustache, seems like its on top of his nose.

Make "real" legs.

Make fingers in the hands instead of balls.

Have the adominal region shifted to the left, looks off center,

Maybe fix up the eyes instead of having dots.


Thinks I like is the color I also like you anatomy. 

[NaCl]

I would give him legs and feet, and center his head over his torso by moving it right a tad thusly:



I personally would make him a little less wide, but that is really a style choice.

[RichardisRaving]

Well I would:

Move the mustache, seems like its on top of his nose.

Make "real" legs.

Make fingers in the hands instead of balls.

Have the adominal region shifted to the left, looks off center,

Maybe fix up the eyes instead of having dots.


Thinks I like is the color I also like you anatomy. 

A few of these things are design choices (such as eyes, legs, and a lack of nose). Also he is supposed to be slightly facing to our right, which is why the abdominals look off center. How would you suggest I emphasize this? I will work on fingers, and making the legs look more like stylized legs instead of sticks. Thanks beeteedubya 

[PASSOUT]

Roger.

[RichardisRaving]

Is this better? Would you say he is facing more to the right(our right)?

[Dr D]

Much better his legs seem a bit skinny though.. Especially compared those arms and abs.

[RichardisRaving]

better legs and a more defined shape. Better?

[Andre]

edit

[Titan]

ah not bad, in fact i really like this,
and Andre your edit is kind of too square-ish.