woman [wip][NUDITY/REVEALING]

[hotnikkelz]

Your last edit was a step in the right direction. Erase the boob lines for now.  Move in steps...focus on the general outline...for now.

Her right shoulder is a bit high.

[balls01]

thats something i can go by those boobs were annoying

[Accident]

<: I'm nowhere near close to an expert, but.

[balls01]

i appreciate the effort and the edit, but i dont think thats what i was looking for... you do raise good points though

[NaCl]

Hey Balls,

Just because Accident's edit is the style you want, doesn't mean there isn't a lot of value there. He (she?) basically laid out the pose you are attempting with anatomical correctness. From that edit you can now see where the breasts should go, also.

[Dusty]

I think you're lacking very important fundamentals. In which case I'd recommend grabbing paper and pencil and practicing.

[balls01]

ive gont through that already...

[Dusty]

ive gont through that already...

I should have elaborated. You seem to lack important fundamentals in basic human anatomy and structure. You seem to just be 'winging' it and just applying changes recommended as you go. You'd probably benefit greatly from first grabbing pencil and paper and practicing human anatomy. Also with this piece it'd help by learning what makes women look different than men. Especially in the face.

What I mean is if you just sit and make all the changes that you're recommended that help just this specific piece, without fully understanding how these improvements can be applied in any perspective, pose or situation, you're skipping a very important step of understanding what you're drawing.

[balls01]

back to the drawing board i go then...? 

[dpixel]

I think what you had in the beginning wasn't that bad.  A few tweaks to the hip area would pull the whole thing together and enable you to see the other parts better.  I know what it's like doing anatomy.  I could never pencil out a whole picture, but working pixel by pixel I can put something together.  I recently did a legs spead nude (too much like porn for this site), it was small...maybe 100x100.  It took me about 3 hours.  She came out cute too.     Yours looks 3 times that size.  As a beginner myself, something this size would probably take me 6 to 8 hours.

All I'm saying is it takes a lot of tweaking for me as a beginner.  So don't give up.  I think you have something going here.