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Offline Winston

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main character critique

on: December 16, 2008, 02:10:31 am
okay I'm working on a main character and I feel it still needs a lot of work, I don't really like the palette im working with and want to change that but here he is, critique please
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Re: main character critique

Reply #1 on: December 18, 2008, 08:12:27 pm
Cute looking, but is that an idle stance? If so, the massive mit sticks out a bit.
This reads more at rest:

If you prefer it sticking out, try counterbalancing it with a more forward tilting stance.
« Last Edit: December 18, 2008, 08:18:19 pm by Salvage »
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Re: main character critique

Reply #2 on: December 22, 2008, 03:58:35 am
thanks! I'll do an edit right now
« Last Edit: December 22, 2008, 04:14:58 am by Winston »
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