This was fun to make

[Tuna Unleashed]

Edit: oh yeah, so was this.

[Pizza Tom]

Cool character! Though, I can't really tell; is his hair two colors, or is he wearing a bandana?

As far as technique goes, everything looks pretty great, except for the spinning motion right before the downward slash. I somehow feel like the power of the motion is diminished. Perhaps it doesn't look weighty enough?

[Dr D]

Probably due to the quickness of the downward slash, and the small amount of dust coming up after it. I think the last slash of the combo should be the most powerful, and therefore, probably take the longest to execute / has the weightiest hit. And right now, it has no sense of weight. I understand that it's his hand, and not a 200-pound Great Sword, but still, there'd be a little anticipation for the last hit.

[Indigo]

yours:


Edit:


I didn't have too much time to spend on it - so this is only a rough start to show you the general direction you should take.  I didn't add anything, I only moved around the stuff that was already there.  The most important thing to notice is you've got all the main motions down, but you completely forget the follow-through.  The body has to compensate for the momentum right after such major movements.  Also, within the 'swishes' I took out a couple frames that were bogging down the flow.

Ben2theEdghe can probably give you a more depthy analysis of this stuff.  I suck at explaining animation.

[Souly]

One thing I'm noticing is the feet look like they are stepping on uneven ground.
It's a neat character and combo, I think the twist might need another frame maybe.

[Tuna Unleashed]

Indigo- whoa, I didn't know such a simple edit could make so much of a difference. I tried to replicate what you did.

[GBPaxton]

The big-hand swipe, I feel, still needs to have more impact (either being overall faster, or doing a slooowfast thing). This is quite wonderful ^_^

[Tuna Unleashed]

Its actually a throw. So just imagine that when he spins he's grabbing a guy then the big swipe is throwing them.

[Jad]

If so, I suggest you make the wind-up even slower and smoother to really add impact to the throw!

Also: great improvement from your last one, I'd say! It's good that you keep evolving even if you're staying within your comfort zone!

[Tuna Unleashed]