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Grass tile[WIP]

on: November 22, 2008, 09:23:45 pm
I need help with this grass tile. The grass right now looks like mounds of grass and the rocks need help.
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Re: Grass tile[WIP]

Reply #1 on: November 22, 2008, 09:28:34 pm
nice pallete colors but looks to much simetric
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Re: Grass tile[WIP]

Reply #2 on: November 23, 2008, 08:06:46 am
the line of the tile is straight put a couple of leafing out grass blades also the grass looks like theyr enclosed shapes like circles square ect. ect. make then like triagles without a base

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Re: Grass tile[WIP]

Reply #3 on: November 23, 2008, 09:21:13 am
I made an edit on the tree:

I kind of un-mirrored it. I tried to give it a proper light source and overall make it look more interesting.

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Re: Grass tile[WIP]

Reply #4 on: November 23, 2008, 04:50:05 pm
Guys I still need help on the grass tile  :'(. Ill work on the tree some more add branches and what not. Thanks guys

"grass looks like theyr enclosed shapes like circles square ect. ect. make then like triagles without a base"
Can you explain?
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Re: Grass tile[WIP]

Reply #5 on: November 23, 2008, 05:46:13 pm
I made an edit to Opacus'.

I like this. Being able to see the top of the grass isn't a bad thing, you just need to add depth and contrast so it doesn't look like a square.
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Re: Grass tile[WIP]

Reply #6 on: November 23, 2008, 06:13:18 pm
now looks better but in nature the second "head" its not common.

i mean, look like a child draw idea  :(

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Re: Grass tile[WIP]

Reply #7 on: November 24, 2008, 01:58:14 am
well as long as it looks fun to watch, right?

I think the extra contrasted edit doesnt really do much for the tiles themselfs. you wanna keep the contraste for the players, rather then the scenary.

the colors really are vibrante and appealing
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Re: Grass tile[WIP]

Reply #8 on: November 29, 2008, 08:35:37 pm


I need some help on this pine tree its been a thorn in my side.

Edit:If you want to get technical it's a blue spruce.
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Re: Grass tile[WIP]

Reply #9 on: November 29, 2008, 08:45:25 pm
So basically you haven't followed any of the suggestions done on the first tree, and now expect us to show interest in another?