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Offline Winston

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Re: platform mockup

Reply #10 on: November 28, 2008, 12:38:32 am
I tried a new edit, not sure how it turned out

its only the crane that was changed
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Re: platform mockup

Reply #11 on: November 28, 2008, 10:34:11 am
As far as style, composition and colors goes, it's near perfect. Good work!

I do think the crane looks a little out of place; it's the only thing on screen that completely lacks an outline. Also, I think the rocks could use a little texture, while still retaining its style.

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Re: platform mockup

Reply #12 on: November 30, 2008, 12:03:57 am
just wanted to say that I love the background work the clouds and cliffs... so simple yet, eye catching... I like em!
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Re: platform mockup

Reply #13 on: November 30, 2008, 06:30:36 pm
I'll attempt an outline on the crane and repost I tried to do a cog as well

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