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Pixelmi

on: November 11, 2008, 03:01:00 am
:yay: This guy is a character I made. It's meant for the gameboy advance.



Comments and critiques are welcome, but I can't promise that I will immediately edit this guy. I am hoping to learn and improve, and will greatly appreciate everything you say and whether or not it appears in this guy, it will definitely be taken in account for future works!

11-11-08, revision based on Souly's suggestions:



thanks
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« Last Edit: November 11, 2008, 04:39:02 pm by blue »

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Re: Pixelmi

Reply #1 on: November 11, 2008, 04:11:30 am
I'm reminded of Serj Tankien.
I like the design.
Though I think more could be done with the clothes, they seem so flat in comparison to the face.

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Re: Pixelmi

Reply #2 on: November 11, 2008, 04:37:49 pm
Thanks, Souly. I agree with you that the clothes are flat. I kind of did that on purpose to make it quicker to animate. The hair also seems flat, I think I will add some highlights to it.

Anyways, here is a revised version based on your suggestions:



The back view still looks a bit flat, though.

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Re: Pixelmi

Reply #3 on: November 11, 2008, 05:33:08 pm
Personally i would see more contrast between the shades
you have a very nice base here.

And maybe colors that are a little bit tasteless.
but some minor changes could make it even better !

keep it up
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Re: Pixelmi

Reply #4 on: November 11, 2008, 07:06:22 pm
It seems largely mirrored and I recommend you change this with more diversity between sides. Besides, he looks evil with that goatee :D