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DementedHero:
Yes, quite common these days, fightersprites  ;)

Well, I've already had some good critique, but I think I need some more.




Mainly, I need some help on the hands.
The (our) left hand looks quite bad, and the other one is just a bit better. I'm not too sure if the skull/spine thingie he's holding matches the style very good..


So, basically, anything you think you can do to help me improve, go ahead  :D

Faktablad:
Let me see what I can do.  I can't help with the hands, because hands confuse me as much as they confuse you.  But here's an image showing the changes I would make:  The original is at the top, mine is at the bottom.  Each row shows one change.

Slayer of Kings:
ummm... no offense or anything, but could you explain what you did? It doesnt really look like youve changed anything at all. Just put some white lines on there.

Drunkyduck:
Look closer. He fixed a lot of issues on this sprite.

Compare the abs, face, left shoulder and his crotch on the original sprite and on the edit.

Rawsushi:
Now you can see the differences, yes?

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