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Re: WIP guy with hammer

Reply #130 on: November 10, 2008, 06:40:58 pm
I'm not that pro but here is my CC

On the portrait,

I dont like it much becouse you can put way more detail on portrait, you can use other colours + more colours i think. + your shade is a bit off,

also you drew the ear from another positon than you did on the head,
The hair is also a bit wierd becouse the hear wich stand up is on the left of his head should be in the midle or the whole (dont know you got this + you can put more detail on the hair)
also HIS right shoulder is a bit to short i think and should be larger his left one is okey

I do like the character its good as far as i can see (ask the beter people for that ;)

btw: dont dubble post? (you triple post and posted one like  11minuts from another one (just edit)?

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Re: WIP guy with hammer

Reply #131 on: November 10, 2008, 07:50:59 pm
That is a really old version of the portrait, I have a much better version done.

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Re: WIP guy with hammer

Reply #132 on: November 10, 2008, 08:03:28 pm
why you post it that if you dont want cc on it and if its a old version -_-''  (just to bump?)

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Re: WIP guy with hammer

Reply #133 on: November 10, 2008, 08:22:40 pm
Because I'm still not done editing. Oh, and sorry about the double posting. I'm used to it working differently on other forums. I'll try to stop.

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Re: WIP guy with hammer

Reply #134 on: November 10, 2008, 08:39:04 pm
I personally have no problems with you doublepostbumping your own thread as long as the new post contains updates, heh.

So no real probs there; I'd rather see new stuff from you than NOT seeing you edit your last post with new art, heh.
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Re: WIP guy with hammer

Reply #135 on: November 10, 2008, 08:46:09 pm
I don't mind the postbumping, but there is question of having gotten very very valid critique and not having tried to apply it as far as I can tell...

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Re: WIP guy with hammer

Reply #136 on: November 10, 2008, 09:27:01 pm
Yeah, Help got a right point out there...rabidbaboy already told you about the recoiling of his left foot ( the front one for us ) when he lift his foot it's not fluid as the right foot
make this fix keeping the light of it :D Make the same edit to the walking animations ;D

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Re: WIP guy with hammer

Reply #137 on: November 10, 2008, 10:16:48 pm
Okay, I'll try to apply more stuff. Oh, and I just realized that I actually did post the new version of the portrait but imageshack was dead for me for a bit and I apparently forgot. *awkward laugh*

better?
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Re: WIP guy with hammer

Reply #138 on: November 11, 2008, 12:36:31 am
Yeah now it's acceptable  :mean:( nahh it's fine   ;) )
Keep go'n, maybe some enemies? or jump animations? :D

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Re: WIP guy with hammer

Reply #139 on: November 11, 2008, 02:15:37 am
For this guy, all I have left to do is his running, ducking, crawling, and attacks.