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Offline Bag Man

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Game Title " Bag Man " (WIP)

on: November 12, 2008, 05:00:05 am
Hi! It's me again xD.

Well, i was working in my game title and my future web title( for my comics, that's why it has written comics on it ), it's cool, it took me to much time looking for a nice color for it.

So...here's it. Critics will be appreciated.

Ignore the background, i looked for the simple cartoonish-style.



- Gerard



 
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Re: Game Title " Bag Man " (WIP)

Reply #1 on: November 12, 2008, 07:05:44 am
Made an poor quick edit.

He doesn't seem to have any bones, tried mending that. His beer belly's shading looks like it's going in.
The cape seemed randomly shaded, I just made it a flat red.
The paper bag's highlight was weird. light doesn't stay to the edge of an object, tried giving it a bit of dimension too.
For the background I figured a solid color would detract less, it's weird for silhouettes to have outlines. The solid color fixes your bad jaggy lines too.
I think you should play with some minor hue shifting and overall palette rearranging.