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tbc90:
This is a little JBL speaker i made. it is not very good, but im am just learning. Please Give me tips.

Evan:
Hey Turner.

Well, for one thing, the outlines are really messy. Try and make them smooth and symmetrical, like one pixel thick. For tutorials and stuff, check the tools and tutorials thread in the General Discussion area.

I think that's the first thing you need to do, and then it will be easier to give crits on it.

See you at school tomorrow XD

tbc90:


A revised version, but i am still haveing trouble getting the curve to look smooth. Any tips are appreciated.

tbc90:


Here is another one i just made I think it is allright but i would still like some sugestions.

Evan:
It's pillow shaded. I know you probably don't know what that means, but basically, it's shading your piece like it's a pillow. It starts with dark shading on the outside and then goes lighter inside. Unless you're pixelling a pillow, you shouldn't do it. I suggest you define a lightsource, and just try and shade as if it were a real thing.

But it's getting better.

Now I have to go pee and make some hot chocolate.

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