[WIP] Pretty Girl

[CoolYoshi]

Shes looking really good now, The shading on the shirt is very nice, cant wait to see everything else shaded. She would look better with long hair, that would bring a more "Pretty" younger look.

[tehwexxl0rz]

Finally getting back to this! I changed the shirt color (as you can see), and I worked on the shading more. Hopefully gave it some more depth? I also shaded the outlines a bit. Does the arm look alright? I know it's very simplified.... I still can't settle on a pose!

I'm prepared to throw out all my previous intentions for this piece. If anyone has any suggestions, they'd be much appreciated.


CoolYoshi: I'll make her hair long!

[NaCl]

The shading on the shirt is excellent. I learned a good amount from looking at it. Besides that, the only crit I can offer is that the light on her shirt seems to be coming from above, while the shading on her arm is coming from directly right.

Keep up the good work, and keep working on this piece. I want to see it done!

[tehwexxl0rz]

Thank you! Good call on the arm. I'll work on that.

Updates might be erratic in the the next couple weeks.... I'll be working on portfolios for colleges.
Hopefully, if I get this done in time, I can use it!