[WIP] Pretty Girl

[tehwexxl0rz]

Update:

LINES AND ARMS!


I know the perspective isn't quite right on her raised arm. Some help there would be appreciated! Do the breasts work with the style I'm using or do they still need work...? How are my lines? Sorry, Helm, the "squiggly noise contours" were not intentional, but rather the product of my trying to sketch with a trackpad! Not fun. Thankfully I've relocated my tablet!

Some notes about where I'm going with this:
I want her body language to communicate shyness but at the same time a kind of subdued playfulness. Her hair will be longer and cascading over her shoulders some. She will be clothed (I'm almost sorry to say), wearing a form-fitting t-shirt and short, denim shorts.

[Helm]

The breasts are fine, quite ample. The left one would be raised higher since the arm is raised. I don't think this body says 'shy' in ANY way though. This is coquettish 'look at my tits', arched back sultry body language. Also generally speaking lower legs thin out more towards the ankles. Do you want an edit for anatomy?

[tehwexxl0rz]

The breasts are fine, quite ample. The left one would be raised higher since the arm is raised. I don't think this body says 'shy' in ANY way though. This is coquettish 'look at my tits', arched back sultry body language. Also generally speaking lower legs thin out more towards the ankles. Do you want an edit for anatomy?

Hmm... well maybe she'd be more shy if other people were around. I guess I want her to have a more general friendly playfulness about her. I thought the ankles should maybe be thinner, but I was worried about making them look TOO thin. I would love an edit for anatomy! Thanks.

[Helm]

Hmm... well maybe she'd be more shy if other people were around.

That's not how shyness works you know.



I tried a bit more shielded a pose. She's trying to be sexy but she's also self-aware at the same time. Some people find this charming.

[Gizmonicgamer]

I'd have to agree with Helm on the matter - though yours is also quite nice. Also depending on the sort of person you're giving it too, Helms approach may be more flattering. If its too sexual or playful, then it could  be miscontrued and not have the sort of reaction you were hoping for.

[tehwexxl0rz]

I'd have to agree with Helm on the matter - though yours is also quite nice. Also depending on the sort of person you're giving it too, Helms approach may be more flattering. If its too sexual or playful, then it could  be miscontrued and not have the sort of reaction you were hoping for.

I didn't intend for her to be THRUSTING her chest out; it just kind of happened as a result of my trying to make her curvy. I'm adjusting her posture now so she'll look more relaxed.

Thanks a lot for the edit, Helm! I'm learning a lot from it!

Still unsure about the arms. I was thinking instead of the hand behind her head, she could be kind of holding her neck.... more of a nervous gesture.

Update coming soon!!

Update:


How's the new pose?

Sorry this is progressing so slooowly. Too much work allows little time to pixel.

[tehwexxl0rz]

I scaled the whole thing down to something more manageable.....

[tehwexxl0rz]

Update:

Shirt! Sorry, I know I'm being inefficient detailing like this when I haven't roughed out the whole pose, but I was impatient!

I've never pixelled fabric folds in such detail.... Am I on the right track? I'm not sure how natural it looks.... C'n'C, please!

[Helm]

well it looks great even though quite strict... I mean not very adventurous. The color ramp is a bit too clean for my tastes but 'my tastes' aren't exactly a basis for critique.

The pixelling on the shirt is efficient. Carry on I'd say 

[Dokozai]

Update:

Shirt! Sorry, I know I'm being inefficient detailing like this when I haven't roughed out the whole pose, but I was impatient!

I've never pixelled fabric folds in such detail.... Am I on the right track? I'm not sure how natural it looks.... C'n'C, please!

Why is her head all scrunched down on her neck?
It seems as though her head is hunched over!
 

But it's still a work in progress, so let's wait until it progresses!