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Re: Plotting Revenge

Reply #10 on: September 15, 2008, 03:45:58 am


I should be sleeping.

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Re: Plotting Revenge

Reply #11 on: September 15, 2008, 06:26:45 pm
loving the violets in the fingers and the red in the scabbard.
careful of different hand sizes.
meassuring palm to middle finger, i see a marked disparity.

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Re: Plotting Revenge

Reply #12 on: September 15, 2008, 06:29:29 pm
For some reason the guard looks like it has different angle than the scabbard. I think perhaps the guard should be a lot less horizontally visible, and visibly in front of the daggers.

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Re: Plotting Revenge

Reply #13 on: September 15, 2008, 08:27:47 pm
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It's tallpixelled
Heh, feeling nostalgic of Amiga's HIRES? ;)

Looks very nice and promising, however - please don't think about beefcake-distorded view :P - again I feel that the arms are a tad too skinny. Shoulders, moreover, do not look exactly right: the right one looks a bit too flat (something's seems to be wrong with its volume) and the left one too bent forward.
As always, well, that's just my inexpert opinion...

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Re: Plotting Revenge

Reply #14 on: September 16, 2008, 02:42:42 am
i think the arms look fine after you took into account turbo's critique, very skinny, yes - but we all have our idealizations. Do you plan for a background?

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Re: Plotting Revenge

Reply #15 on: September 16, 2008, 02:45:22 am
Yeah, darkened tavern. Edge of a table, a spilt tankard of beer, perhaps some garlic in the background! Don't get too excited though, it'll mostly be from-darkness-arises-small-moodsetting-detail.

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Re: Plotting Revenge

Reply #16 on: September 16, 2008, 02:47:27 am
Well that still sounds pretty enticing to me : D
( you should fit the yus bird on a tree branch in a broken window : o)

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Re: Plotting Revenge

Reply #17 on: September 16, 2008, 04:20:57 am


Still working on the rendering. Various small fixes.

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Re: Plotting Revenge

Reply #18 on: September 16, 2008, 04:35:28 am
Still think even that guard needs to be drawn in front of the daggers, or the angle of the scabbard changed.

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Re: Plotting Revenge

Reply #19 on: September 16, 2008, 04:56:03 am
New sword hilt and the daggers are groovy :)
Face is a bit angular for my taste, though, and- this is my main problem with the piece -the red on the shirt seems out of place. It looks like it'd be trim for some super-fancy nobleman's platemail, not some bastard swordsman scum, which is what I presume this guy is. I think you should go with... a cheaper color and maybe less rigid fabric. Something more appropriate for the time and person? :-*
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